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Clowder posted an update in the group
share your psyche: 2 years, 10 months ago Regards to Gate Number Five
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I’m all out of ammo.
sorry.I know that maybe I’ve taken the sport out of it.
I know that maybe you have that gun to temple.
sorry.It’s all these formal affairs and
taking the tea at three o’clock,
that numb me,
that peel me back like a sunburn.I never really wanted anyone to
listen to me in the first place.
Please take your letters of
recommendation,
and luggage to a
different terminal.
I appear to be closed,
indefinitely.
sorry.————————–
Constructive criticism is appreciated! <3
Awwww, this hits home. My mom is going through a dark period and sometimes it’s a bit infectious. I love this, especially the ending…closes down with that perfect ’snap’ and feeling of finality. I read over it about three times….
Thank you for your comment, and best wishes to you and your mom.