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She locked the door, barricaded it… but she stil heard him coming. Panic rose up through her veins until she felt choked by it. What could she do? the window? Too high up… and jammed anyway. Hide? maybe… she stasheded herslef in the back of the closest, nearly crying out when she heard the door [...]
so suspenseful!
at first, I thought you were going to say that she was going to take the Pamela approach and just faint on the floor the moment she locked the door. I’m glad your characters have a little more sense than Richardson’s. :)
lol, yeah I don’t write little bitches… Even Mr B was a little bitch, and he made no sense. He was willing to kidnap a girl and he was about to rape her that time that she fainted. I don’t understand why her fainting should have inhibited him, you would have thought that it would just make his job easier. Plus, he whined a ton and threw fits like a five year old. If he were my kid, I’d go upside his head.