Comments on: deep

By: lizziface

lizziface — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 17:07:07 +0000

whenever someone says they don’t like people who “try” to be deep i am instantly offended. because how can you really tell if someone is “trying” to be deep, or if they really just are? i mean, don’t we all have the capacity? isn’t it just a choice as to whether or not we take things on surface level, or if we read between the lines?

By: snowboy

snowboy — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 15:56:23 +0000

sleep is deep
my girlfriend's eyes are also deep
some guys in russia dug a really deep hole and thought they could hear sounds from hell
if there was a hole going to the centre of the earth i guess that would be deep too.

By: kiki

kiki — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 15:44:54 +0000

like the ocean, puddles splashing in winter, thinking thoughts for loved ones, holding tightly to those you miss, lower me down to the depths of despair, where i swim with the dolphins

By: Jessica J. Zimdars

Jessica J. Zimdars — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 15:28:58 +0000

Kate was so deep in her thoughts she didn’t realize when she’d stepped out of daisy field and onto the dirt road. She blinked at the dirt in front of her and looked both ways. To one side was her home, to the other the unknown. Which way should she go?

By: erich

erich — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 14:54:50 +0000

well the pool in my yard is deep. it goes down to about 9 feet. but that is not deep compared to the center of the earth, which is really deep into the earth. I don’t think it is possible to go down that deep to the center of the earth. I can barely hold my breath at 9 feet deep water. I used to be able to last summer. I guess I need to practice getting down that far again.

By: Ashley B

Ashley B — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 14:53:39 +0000

Deep in the ground here I lay. Not quite lifeless and cold, but progressing there quickly. My husband. The one I “loved”. Ha love is a trap for which we fall for everyday, and have it jerked away.

By: L

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 14:47:09 +0000

Deep, deep, deeper they plunged into the forest, stopping not for tree nor overgrown vine not animal. No, they had a more flagitious goal.

By: dd

dd — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 14:16:25 +0000

He dove deep into the water and went down and down and still down and still he had not yet reached the the bottom of the deep water. Could he make it? His lungs were burning. What would he do ? What should he do. Could he go deeper. Was there a reason.

By: Luan

Luan — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:51:58 +0000

in the ocean lives the cthulhu. wound that goes down so much that no more blood flows. Where horrible things live that don’t even go bump in the night, that seep into the edges of our imagination. They impinge on our consciousness.

By: wellwornwings

wellwornwings — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:18:55 +0000

pull me under
my heart has seen
a many day
where your hands have been
too tightly grasped
around my neck
albatross
i know you cannot fathom
the words that grace my lips
but these words
will always rise up
to meet the times
when we are alone
and tangled
and free.