Comments on: fences

By: Jenna

Jenna — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 18:11:34 +0000

I’ve lived behind a fence my entire life. So safe and so consoled, i dont feel like im human. What does being human feel like?

By: Jenna

Jenna — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 18:09:39 +0000

I’ve always wondered what was over the fence. Maybe a separate universe or maybe my subconscious takes me over there while i’m asleep so the wonders of my mind could create pictures of a better life for me. When I was younger, i heard that the neighbor that lived there died of a heart attack. Maybe his soul is the sounds that i hear over the fence that constantly linger my mind, and make me hope that theres something fighting for over it.

By: Alice

Alice — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 18:09:10 +0000

I have been living inside a fence my entire life. Every so often, I walk around the edge, along the inner perimeter, and look for a gate. It has been nineteen years now, and I still haven’t found one. If only I could scale these iron bars, but they are too high, and have deadly pointed tips ringed with sharp shards of glass.

By: Heather

Heather — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 18:06:44 +0000

The fences were white and the little kids played infront of them with their dolls. The neighbord was walking past and smiled at them like she did every day. The white fence was a perfect background for the scene of the little kids playing. She didnt think that the scene would be as endearing if the fence werent there.

By: Kathryn

Kathryn — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 17:49:47 +0000

These words
These fences
These pains
Keeping us apart.
The past…
Keeping us apart.
I miss you.

By: sakshi

sakshi — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 17:48:40 +0000

protections…. what comes first when you thing aboyut fences? protection,chickens,coops,sheeps etc. they are in our backyard and near rivers. they help us
in being safe.

By: Kendyl Raye

Kendyl Raye — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 17:37:49 +0000

Those beautiful white picket fences. We always wanted one, always craved for that lifestyle. But that’s not you is it? Of course not. You’d rather fly than perch.

By: Tracy Dennis

Tracy Dennis — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 17:28:55 +0000

Fences keep people out and keep you in. Do you really need them yes? Sometimes. Can they cause a problem? Yes. Sometimes. What have you got a fence around today? Make it something that’s worth preserving. If not, you may be missing out on the best opportunity ever.

By: Zoe

Zoe — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 17:23:12 +0000

There are lots of fences on my block. Big fences, chain link fences, all types. But there’s one that’s special. It’s orange and tall and it’s next to a parking lot on one side and my house on the other. The thing is, it’s too tall. So we have to make it shorter. Only, we don’t want to.

By: Amanda

Amanda — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 17:02:51 +0000

I keep trying to jump over these fences but I can’t get over all of them. Maybe it is time for me to look for another way around them.