Comments on: near

By: Spirit_Writer

Spirit_Writer — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 19:58:46 +0000

He was so close that I thought I would be able to touch him. So near that his warmth should have rubbed up against my skin like a blanket caressing me in the middle of the night. He was there, close enough to talk to me, but so far away. I reached out and my hand slide through his memory and he vanished. Tears started to roll down my cheeks and I wanted to curl into a ball and start crying. I wrapped my arms around myself, and sat alone in my room. Why, why did you have to leave me? I’m so alone.

By: dan

dan — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 18:00:50 +0000

I want to keep you near. I can never go far without thinking of you; it never gets easier knowing you won’t ever be around again. I want to keep you near, but you’ll always be so far away.

By: Ellis Fields

Ellis Fields — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:54:03 +0000

If you take off the N, then it spells “ear.” Interesting? No, not really. But nevertheless, it is a fact. I wish I was near you, but you can’t always get what you want.

By: Natalie

Natalie — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:51:57 +0000

And as I sped down the highway at what was probably too reckless a pace for the amount of hair the wind was blowing into my eyes, guitar solo blasting from the beat up radio, Indian summer heat in my eyes and in my heart, I felt so much more near to God than I had for some time.

By: Jeeves

Jeeves — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:45:49 +0000

Near me is my bowl of food. I love it. so damn delicious it was. wish I could have this every night. but what about soulfood? now that is another kind of near isn’t it?

By: Kristina

Kristina — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:44:30 +0000

The little girl was standing so very close, so near to the edge, that her mother knew that she wouldn’t make it in time. She raced still, hoping against hopes that she would beat the clock and make it to her child in time to save her. But the little girl had no notice of how near she was. She played and laughed and picked at the grass, not realizing that the ground beneath her was crumbling, about to give way to the waves below the cliff

By: lauren

lauren — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:35:33 +0000

near me is my phone a caliber and apple jacks. i am near my family only an hour long drive away. near my roommate is her bead her couch and her window with a window seal. we are near a jail a train station and a pnc bank. we are also near our school and near the school is the corner store and near that is the batman set thats taking place near my work.

By: cam

cam — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:33:32 +0000

the farther away you are, the more it hurts. it hurts to see you with someone else. but i understand that when you were near me, all we did was fight. we fought, yelled, screamed, and sometimes exchanged blows.

it’s okay you don’t want to be anywhere near me. i’m used to being abandoned. it’s okay. it’s okay. it’s okay.

By: Gabby

Gabby — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:31:22 +0000

It didn’t occur to me that we were so far from each other. Even though I’m right next to you, you really aren’t there. When did you get this way. When I thought I was near to your heart like you are near to mine.

By: scotchwhiskers

scotchwhiskers — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 17:30:56 +0000

When the house went up ion flames three figures raqn away into the darkness – one had four legs and one a skirt or kilt – it was so dark that beyond the circle of flickering luight they vanished as though dropping from the earth over a precipice – very fitting as it happened because of what happened the following days