Comments on: path http://oneword.com/word/path/ Fri, 24 May 2013 07:16:00 +0000 hourly 1 By: henry http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113467 henry Sun, 26 Oct 2008 12:40:21 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113467 <p>There is a simple dirt path<br /> beyond the lilacs and the roses<br /> where earthen velvet slides a lover's arm<br /> between the red and purple bedsheets</p> There is a simple dirt path
beyond the lilacs and the roses
where earthen velvet slides a lover’s arm
between the red and purple bedsheets

]]> By: nahla http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113468 nahla Sun, 26 Oct 2008 12:17:26 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113468 <p>narrow path, wide path. path for truth, path for lies. what is a path? people might define it in different ways. i define it as a "way". a path for happiness and successful life would be a clear path</p> narrow path, wide path. path for truth, path for lies. what is a path? people might define it in different ways. i define it as a “way”. a path for happiness and successful life would be a clear path

]]> By: Anjul http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113469 Anjul Sun, 26 Oct 2008 11:18:37 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113469 <p>It was a dark and stormy walkway over looking the cliffs and the ocean. Treacherous as it seemed, it was still the most comforting area I could find to stroll. Listening the the thunder, sounding so close to my head, and the ocean throbbing at my feet.</p> It was a dark and stormy walkway over looking the cliffs and the ocean. Treacherous as it seemed, it was still the most comforting area I could find to stroll. Listening the the thunder, sounding so close to my head, and the ocean throbbing at my feet.

]]> By: L. http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113470 L. Sun, 26 Oct 2008 11:11:31 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113470 <p>How appropriate, since i'm trying to find my own again. I actually started to write this and then closed the window...but then went back and the word was still waiting for me. I need to stop chopping off my own thoughts. <br /> Path. Paths. I'm so afraid I won't find my own back to what I THINK I love doing, or what I may. Right now, I need to begin by making tracks out of this town and letting it lay itself out before me as it always has...but getting out comes first.</p> How appropriate, since i’m trying to find my own again. I actually started to write this and then closed the window…but then went back and the word was still waiting for me. I need to stop chopping off my own thoughts.
Path. Paths. I’m so afraid I won’t find my own back to what I THINK I love doing, or what I may. Right now, I need to begin by making tracks out of this town and letting it lay itself out before me as it always has…but getting out comes first.

]]> By: KC Shaffer http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113471 KC Shaffer Sun, 26 Oct 2008 10:29:20 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113471 <p>The pathway you've chosen has taken you down a dark road. You may be with her now, but soon enough you'll be lonely. You've blocked off all entrances for your friends and any other form of aid. I hope you're happy.</p> <p>What were you thinking, using me like this? Did you think I wouldn't care, that this wouldn't hurt? </p> <p>You're wrong. I'm frustrated. From now on, walk alone.</p> The pathway you’ve chosen has taken you down a dark road. You may be with her now, but soon enough you’ll be lonely. You’ve blocked off all entrances for your friends and any other form of aid. I hope you’re happy.

What were you thinking, using me like this? Did you think I wouldn’t care, that this wouldn’t hurt?

You’re wrong. I’m frustrated. From now on, walk alone.

]]> By: tigger http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113472 tigger Sun, 26 Oct 2008 10:21:56 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113472 <p>the path to destruction is a path i will probably follow<br /> i dont know what i'm writing right now, but i do know that this in itself is part of my path<br /> that tomorrow another thing will come up and i will actually write about it for 60 seconds<br /> or do something else that really serves me no concrete benefit<br /> but i'll do it and hope that some beauty comes out of the framework <br /> that somehow i'll look better<br /> feel better<br /> love myself<br /> be loved<br /> but who really knows<br /> this certainly hasnt done it<br /> not to say that i wont wake up tomorrow and my wishes won't come true<br /> if they do, i'll probably never thank this place<br /> but it might have given me happiness</p> the path to destruction is a path i will probably follow
i dont know what i’m writing right now, but i do know that this in itself is part of my path
that tomorrow another thing will come up and i will actually write about it for 60 seconds
or do something else that really serves me no concrete benefit
but i’ll do it and hope that some beauty comes out of the framework
that somehow i’ll look better
feel better
love myself
be loved
but who really knows
this certainly hasnt done it
not to say that i wont wake up tomorrow and my wishes won’t come true
if they do, i’ll probably never thank this place
but it might have given me happiness

]]> By: allie http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113473 allie Sun, 26 Oct 2008 10:20:39 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113473 <p>the path that was ahead wasn't necessarily a treacherous one... </p> the path that was ahead wasn’t necessarily a treacherous one…

]]> By: yeah right! http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113474 yeah right! Sun, 26 Oct 2008 10:02:48 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113474 <p>i was led up the garden path by a beautiful woman wearing only a negligee. she asked me if I was coming to her party and though we had never met, i said that of course i would. after writing the details on the back of a doctor's appointment slip i left in high spirits if still a little confused. </p> i was led up the garden path by a beautiful woman wearing only a negligee. she asked me if I was coming to her party and though we had never met, i said that of course i would. after writing the details on the back of a doctor’s appointment slip i left in high spirits if still a little confused.

]]> By: Lauren http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113475 Lauren Sun, 26 Oct 2008 10:02:15 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113475 <p>Oh man, which one to choose. There are the easy ones, the obviously nearly impossible ones...I like a challenging path. Sometimes I'm afraid of it because I fear failure more than my mother fears death. But I took a strong step today...and yesterday...and the day before that. So...step by step I'll eventually choose that nearly impossible one.</p> Oh man, which one to choose. There are the easy ones, the obviously nearly impossible ones…I like a challenging path. Sometimes I’m afraid of it because I fear failure more than my mother fears death. But I took a strong step today…and yesterday…and the day before that. So…step by step I’ll eventually choose that nearly impossible one.

]]> By: Bethany http://oneword.com/word/path/comment-page-33/#comment-113476 Bethany Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:39:03 +0000 http://oneword.com/staging/word/path/#comment-113476 <p>The path you take in life... I wish I'd taken the path MORE traveled on. The path less traveled on is much more confusing. Interesting, but confusing. It'd be easier on the path more traveled. </p> <p>This has made all the difference.</p> The path you take in life… I wish I’d taken the path MORE traveled on. The path less traveled on is much more confusing. Interesting, but confusing. It’d be easier on the path more traveled.

This has made all the difference.

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