Comments on: poison

By: N

Mon, 22 Aug 2011 18:11:30 +0000

It’s in me. It doesn’t affect me, but if you kill me, you will get it. It will spread. It’s unstoppable. But I didn’t mean to turn this into a horror story. Let’s start from the beginning.

By: brittany

brittany — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 18:10:04 +0000

there should have been a warning, but there wasn’t. they could have told her that he was no good, but they liked the game as much as he did. they watched her struggle and go under like a drowning child. she never even had a chance.

By: Lauren

Lauren — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 18:08:28 +0000

I still remember Snow White. She was my least favorite of the Disney princesses, and in the end, still managed to get the prince. Now I dream all the time about the poison apple, making her already white skin flush further. Biting into it and falling into a new type of darkness.

By: Giles.

Giles. — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 18:06:32 +0000

I pressed the cup to my lips. I knew full well that the kool-aid would be tart, I never imagined that it would taste so sweet. The room began to spin, the cries of children, the wonderful smell of Windex and sugar. Goodnight world.

By: garf

garf — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 18:02:24 +0000

Poison is something you can’t feel, or see, or drink, or… no, actually you can drink it. It could kill you. Yes. Indeed. Kill you right dead. So you don’t even feel it anymore. Poison is freedom! Venomous freedom! Sweet venom!

By: Jordan Medina

Jordan Medina — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 18:01:01 +0000

It will kill me in the inside. Dammit love it is never forgivable. It just eats away at you and there is ansolutely nothing you can do but just watch yourself fail captive to fate.

By: John

John — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 17:59:30 +0000

Poison coming out of the air into the lungs of the people through cigarettes and carbon manoxide pollutaints,
Make my brain itch and my hand search for a stratch,
But I restrain and pull that hand back and put it back and put it back in my pocket,
I walk down the desolate road, baren and empty like a ghost town picked clean,
I finally gasp and hold my throat in pain and fall forward my face in the dust.

By: Jess Goss

Jess Goss — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 17:55:33 +0000

Lucy put the cup to her lips, taking a small, experimental sip at first. The liquid within was bitter and she almost spat it out. Against her taste buds’ wishes, she swallowed, and followed her first sip with three large mouthfuls which drained the cup entirely. She would be dead in minutes.

By: Peta

Peta — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 17:53:49 +0000

is horrible and scary, that someone could be fed such a thing and wouldnt know that they have consumed it which in turn leaves the body to fight flight and react to saving the human life – its interesting some of the side effects that poison can give a human – hallucinations, below freezing temperatures, over heating – the body’s ability to survive this is incredible

By: Gabby

Gabby — Mon, 22 Aug 2011 17:52:54 +0000

my poison is the best poison
it does a fine job destroying