Comments on: reflection

By: Kalia

Kalia — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 19:05:15 +0000

i see my reflection in the mirror. i dont even recognize who it is. i simply stare at the face. is it me? tear stains are covering my face and the dirt makes it look muddy. Why me? and why now? I miss the old me who wasnt covered with mud and tears and pain…

By: Andie

Andie — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 19:04:22 +0000

The pine trees made for an eerie reflection on the lake’s surface, like menacing giants, until they were shattered by the wake of a jet ski skipping across the mirror.

By: Gabriel T Flores III

Gabriel T Flores III — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 19:01:30 +0000

detection, faces uknown and known. Not sure what im seeing infront of me, whats being shown? glassed, glazed over water, my loved ones, someones brother mother and daughter. truth, god, age, youth. Im right here my reflections living proof.

By: dingo

dingo — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 19:00:51 +0000

On reflection I find that this exercise is both amusing and educational. Whether it helps my writing remains to be seen, or not, by no one in particular.

By: Taylor

Taylor — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 19:00:04 +0000

YOU LOOK IN THE MIRROR AND YOU SEE YOURSELF WHICH IS CALLED A REFLECTION

By: Bianca

Bianca — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 18:57:51 +0000

Reflections of light passing through, all over and around our dance floor. The bumps and beats…music flowing, moves our bodies to the melody of techno. Every one in their own trance, hearing and seeing different things. Moving different limbs.

By: Bekkah

Bekkah — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 18:55:51 +0000

She stares at the window, trying to see past the mirrored image of herself against the glass. But she cannot. The possibilities of the future are dimmed by the dried blood on her forehead, flaking onto her nose and falling onto the windowsill. It is caked under her fingernails. He might be gone, but the marks he made will be with her forever. No matter how they tell her to forget him, she cannot. She sees reminders of him in every part of her, within and without. The baby kicks, and she sucks in her breath. Only a few more months now, and her future will be settled.

By: Copland

Copland — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 18:51:38 +0000

My reflection's shadow
knows what I used to know
this is his gift and his curse
all at the same time

He still hasn't met you
His heart is still so blue
But when you meet him you'll fix it
then you'll break it again
Like you did to me.

By: Lisa

Lisa — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 18:50:57 +0000

Reflecion. Jedes Mal, wenn ich das Wort Reflexion auf Deutsch oder auf Spanisch schreibe, ¸berlege ich wieder, ob es mit x oder mit kt geschrieben wird. Ich glaube, bei den letzten Malen hat mir die Rechtsschreibkontrolle immer x angezeigt, aber so ganz sicher bin ich mir immer noch nicht. Wer weiﬂ, was das reflektiert?

By: none.

none. — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 18:46:18 +0000

reflection on the water and fell in after about a minute and had not time to remember what was going on. i was staring at myself for a moment and then i suddently feel into myself and got lost. i was feeling the water going up my nose and trying to choke me. i couldn’t breathe and wonderd yhow i could do that to myself